You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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. I certainly agree with

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that

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do improve our

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essay will describe my viewpoint in detail.

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the fact that different people have different opinions and views on

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especially if they enhance our life or if they promote us to purchase the things that we

maynot

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may not

necessarily need. A month back I was struggling really hard to shop my groceries from Walmart as there were many people in the store. It was not just the crowd but

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the safety concern which bothered me as we are struggling with the spread of COVID-19 and many

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are getting affected

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virus. I asked myself, is it really safe to come here? I saw an advertisement for an app named 'Uber Eats' which allows us to order groceries online.

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it was the

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time for me to buy something online, I will

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say that it made my job so much easier and safer than before. Stating another example of an ad which I saw on youtube a year back, it was about a project management

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named 'monday.com'.

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allows to

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and organize the work more efficiently as compared to

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traditional management

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. I am using

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software

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for more than a year now and it has helped me manage my work more efficiently than before.

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I support the fact that

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have impacted our

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in a positive way and they have not only made our living easier but

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so much better and enhanced.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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