You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Advertisements

have become an integral part of our

lives

. Right from the morning when we read the newspaper, to scrolling through

instagram

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and

facebook

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Facebook

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throughout the day, we see several

advertisements

. I certainly agree with

viewpoint

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the viewpoint

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that

advertisements

do improve our

lives

and

this

essay will describe my viewpoint in detail.

Well

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,Well

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there is no denial

to

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of

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the fact that different people have different opinions and views on

advertisements

especially if they enhance our life or if they promote us to purchase the things that we

maynot

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may not

necessarily need. A month back I was struggling really hard to shop my groceries from Walmart as there were many people in the store. It was not just the crowd but

also

the safety concern which bothered me as we are struggling with the spread of COVID-19 and many

lives

are getting affected

with

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by

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this

virus. I asked myself, is it really safe to come here? I saw an advertisement for an app named 'Uber Eats' which allows us to order groceries online.

Although

it was the

first

time for me to buy something online, I will

definetely

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definitely

say that it made my job so much easier and safer than before. Stating another example of an ad which I saw on youtube a year back, it was about a project management

software

named 'monday.com'.

This

software

allows to

manage

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management

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and organize the work more efficiently as compared to

a

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apply

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traditional management

software

. I am using

this

software

for more than a year now and it has helped me manage my work more efficiently than before.

Hence

I support the fact that

advertisements

have impacted our

lives

in a positive way and they have not only made our living easier but

also

so much better and enhanced.