People do not often interact with their neighbours and this can be harmful for building communities. What are the possible causes and how can this be solved? ⠀

In
this
day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that nowadays inhabitants rarely strike up conversations with their
neighbors
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and
this
problem,
therefore
, can spell trouble for developing communities.
This
essay will discuss likely reasons in terms of
this
issue and suggest some solutions to deal with it. From my perspective, there are two possible causes leading to
this
problem. The
first
one is that youngsters devote their time to immersing themselves in the virtual world
such
as Facebook or Instagram and most importantly, they lean towards chatting with their friends in lieu of widening their social circle by having interaction with their
neighbors
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. The
second
one is that
young
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generation, particularly students, have to shoulder the pressure of having excellent academic performance,
thus
, they have a tendency to bury themselves in studying to avoid being blamed by their
parents
instead
of going out and having a face to face conversation with their
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. With all the reasons mentioned above, I strongly suppose that there are two solutions
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this
issue.
Firstly
,
parents
should incentivize their offspring to be more interactive with their
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by finding a person, reaching the same age
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their children from
neighbors
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and when their offspring become intimate with that person, they will be apt to have
communication
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with older family members of that one.
Secondly
, it is necessary that
parents
ought to educate their children
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value of interaction with their
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. To be more specific,
parents
can mention possible dangers, which can put their family members’ lives in life-
threating
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threatening
situations if without
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help.
For instance
, they may talk about structural fires and say that in
this
case, their
neighbors
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can play
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role of firefighters in extinguishing
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. In conclusion, it is important to communicate with
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and with all solutions given above, I hope that people can become interactive with their
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to build communities.
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