Some people think that governments should do more to help citizens to adopt healthy diets. Others, however, believe that individuals should be responsible for their own diets. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that authorities should undertake the responsibility of adapting healthy
diet
habits
for their people
or should individual themselves taking care of it. Although
governments might be able to raise awareness, I still believe people
must watch out for themselves.
Some said that governments should take control of people
's eating habits
because it helps to bring down the medical bills. this
is because governments R shouldering the consequences of unhealthy diet
habits
bye stress out the public medical system. If authorities can educate the public about a healthy diet
and prevent the unhealthy eating style from happening from the beginning, it will bring down the cost of the medical system dramatically. For example
, through years of messages spreading, people
now have the awareness of controlling themselves from eating salty food
to get away from high blood pressure-related disease. Despite this
, I still believe diet
habits
are personal choices and one must be responsible for him or herself.
People
make decisions about what they eat every day. this
means that they might already comprehend the necessity of eating healthily. However
, they still failed to maintain it no matter how hard the government broadcast the concepts. So the decisions of foods are still controlled by people
themselves. For instance
, despite the fact salty foods will lead to health hazards, some people
still think it's a good idea to have food
with an exceeded amount of sodium every day. I believe that people
are responsible for them all judgments about food
selection because they understand all the results.
In conclusion, maybe the government might be capable to establish the mindsets to shoulder the obligations, I still think food
choices are personal and must be responded by
individuals.Change preposition
to by
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