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Effects of size heterogeneity, feeding/fasting strategy and stocking density modulation on body performance and cannibalism rate of Persian sturgeon (Acipenser persicus) larvae

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On the other side, counting disappeared
larvae
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 leads to conclude
cannibalism
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 rate increased in staved
larvae
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 treatments (experiment-B),
in particular
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 for those in hetero and homo-small distribution. Having aggression was apparently observed by pursuing injured
larvae
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 in starved treatment of both experiments. To some extend
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, over the rearing of other species, spotted seatrout Cynoscion nebulosus, across hatchery-condition, the aggressive nature was slightly alleviated feeding frequently and stocking
density
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 played a passive role as much as the other factors (Manley, Rakocinski, Lee, & Blaylock, 2014; Manley at al., 2015). Folkvord. (1990) and Baras (2013),
on the contrary
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, confirming
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 rate would be higher as long as fish
larvae
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 and a juvenile were starved . Though,
cannibalism
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 as aggressive
behaviour
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 can be strengthened, similar to our results, by a large amount of food or/and high stocking
density
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 (Naumowicz et al., 2017).
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 could be referred to the
Persian
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sturgeon
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 nature that feeding
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 high
density
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 can lead to cannibalistic
behaviour
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 and
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, it would not be primarily increased unless fish had
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 interactions for food, space or even having
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 heterogeneity. Cannibals apparently cause dyeing small
larvae
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 ,especially those are in the starved groups. Baras et al. (2003) supported the hypothesis expressing cannibals are more eager small fish in a starved group of Eurasian perch. In our study,
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, it seems the feeding strategy and
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 sorting in spotted seatrout can alter aggressive
behaviour
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 more than the stocking
density
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 (Manley et al., 2015). So, the variation in species could probably play a key role in the
cannibalism
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 rate. Reduction of stocking
density
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 along with surging in feeding frequency mitigated the
cannibalism
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 in Asian seabass (Ribeiro et al., 2015).
This
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 study provides the information confirming feed/fast strategy should be prioritized in
Persian
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sturgeon
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 larviculture. Admittedly, not to mention, the feeding strategy along with moderation stocking
density
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 might make an appropriate model for alleviation aggressive
behaviour
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 in
Persian
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sturgeon
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 larviculture. Knowledge in
size
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 sorting help hatcheries to have more survivability and growth performance based on food competition or
cannibalism
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 issue, while both starvation and high stocking can
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 cause
size
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 distribution more and more., Rearing
Persian
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sturgeon
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larvae
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 by feeding in optimum
density
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, with
size
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 homogeneity can apply to have a well-organized larviculture.

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