In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the majority of

people

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believe that it is important to invest in building new railway tracks for superfast

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to connect different cities, whereas others postulate that the

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should focus on spending money in maintaining the available public travel options.

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, in my perspective, I strongly believe that there is a need for bullet

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for faster connectivity. On the one hand, in

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ultra-modern world,

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are looking for the fastest mode of commutation at a better price.

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is mainly due to the fact that life has become over demanding in urban cities because of job roles, due to which, they require

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modes which can help them to reach their destination faster by avoiding traffic.

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, Surat is a diamond hub and

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from Mumbai are travelling daily there for job purpose which is almost 400km distance. Eventually, the

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launched

fast

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train between Mumbai and Surat for the convenience of the passengers. Seen in

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light, it can be said that fast

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are

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of an hour.

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, some others do not agree with the aforementioned standpoint because they think that the existing public

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has to be well-maintained and provide better service for its passengers. The reason for

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is if the

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spends money only on new facilities,

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the old ones will be neglected;

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people

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still will travel with present public transit for their daily purpose.

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, in Surat, the

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services are not supreme and well connected to the nearby villages which create inconvenience to travellers. Not only

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can raise the frequency of the

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/buses, but

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it can increase staff to serve better to the public.

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, it becomes apparent that the current transportation modes have to be focused

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To conclude, though there can be very fast

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but

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many

people

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always consider travelling on public

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because it is safer and

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. In my opinion, having advanced

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mode available in the city makes travelling easier. If we adapt to new ways of commuting,

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life will become easy.