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Now a days, parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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High qualification for
children
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 is the most major concern for their parents and to give better education to them parents
prefers
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 to send them to developed
countries
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.
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student
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's self-confidence and awareness are the biggest advantages of
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, but anxiety and financial crisis are primary disadvantages to study
aboard
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abroad
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.
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 with, the foremost benefit of studying out of owns nation is that it makes
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 self-dependent and responsible. They have to manage themselves in
stranger
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a stranger
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 country without
supporting
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 from their guardians.
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, the level of confidence among them increases
in sufficient
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 way to face difficulties as a
student
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.
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, a survey conducted recently by Cambridge University has revealed that 45% of the world's pupils who are surviving in other
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 with various problems are capable to handle any situation compared to other students.
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, while getting advanced education from foreign institutes
children
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 get
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 with new people, culture and tradition.
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, they enhance their knowledge about the host
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.
Therefore
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 aboard
student
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's life imparts individually development to
children
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. Despite these advantages, it can never be denied that there are negative impacts of opting
studying
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 at
international
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the international
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 level.
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, many
children
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 might be
victim
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a victim
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 of stress and loneliness due to
homesickness
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 nature. There is always
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of
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time
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 in
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student's
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a student's
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 life to spend quality
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 with
friend
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.
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,
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 condition led to
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mental illness
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 aborts students.
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, they need to manage their budget with
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 source of income even after spending allowed hours on different jobs.
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, they face
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time
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 to
fulfill
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 their desires with insufficient income and they live
low
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a low
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 standard of lives.
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,
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on
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study
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 found that several pupils have committed suicide owing to
lack
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a lack
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 of job opportunists for fresher.
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,
this
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 trend becomes harmful for
youth
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 of any nation. To conclude, sending
children
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 to other
countries
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 for obtaining advance education gives chance to them live an independent life but numerous critical situations they have to control while spending their
live
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 at international universities.
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, parents must provide them emotional and funds support
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time
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 to
time
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 to achieve their
children
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's goals.
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