The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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Imitation
is a quality that hugely seen in human from infants to old ages. It is often believed that
this
tendency makes
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of clothes and various consumables. In my opinion, I completely
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this
statement as copying others’ styles, the same product can be purchased by many.
To begin
with,
the
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mankind, especially
young
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generation, follows the
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foot-steps
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of his idols in their different stages of life, even, in their costumes.
This
is because we, human, get a superior feeling by copying
dressing
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styles of well-known personalities.
For instance
, in
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the advertisement
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, celebrities endorse different branded clothing since the makers are well aware
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human
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psychology of
imitation
and people tend to purchase designer sarees and salwar. Apart from
this
,
imitation
may assist to carry
one self
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into a better personality.
Secondly
, people tend to buy various products which are available in the market by seeing how others in the
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use
this
.
This
can be so evident, especially, among home-makers. They purchase many expensive products after observing others.
For example
, in India, most of the household has their own tele-
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, which is become a necessity,
this
is the aftermath of
imitation
of western style of entertainment.
Therefore
, it is believed when more and more imitate other’s personal accessories would set trend in the industry. In conclusion,
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the habit
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of copying others is the reason why certain dressing or products are so famous in the market. People follow dressing, food habit and material goods and so on. It is predicted that
this
situation will be flourished in the future as well.
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