Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Other think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that youngster should follow the traditional values and norms of their society. While others find an opportunity in disguise to be treated as a person who has the freedom to act.
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perspective
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and explain why I support the former view.
Firstly
, those who hold the thought that an individual should be engaged in following traditions and cultures advocated that it
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the wealth of the motion.
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is to say that today's youth should preserve the ancient culture and tradition for
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future reference. Which can increase the countries popularity.
For instance
, a recent government survey in our country has demonstrated that
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of foreigners want to visit our country "Nepal" due to our ancient and historical traditions and monuments.
Therefore
, it is known as the wealth of the nation.
On the other hand
, people who oppose
this
view feel that every individual has
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freedom.
In other words
, a person can make their choice either to agree or not without any force.
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, a recent study of a media channel, NTV has revealed that sixty-five
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of
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successful people are living their life as per their desire. For
this
reason, a person should be free to behave. Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that traditions of any society are the most valuable treasure;
however
, some believe an
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to make
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choices
.
Therefore
, I wholeheartedly believe that every citizen should play an important role to save our precious tradition for
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generation.
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