Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Other think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that youngster should follow the traditional values and norms of their society. While others find an opportunity in disguise to be treated as a person who has the freedom to act.
This
essay will analyze both persoective
and explain why I support the former view.
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perspective
perspectives
Firstly
, those who hold the thought that an individual should be engaged in following traditions and cultures advocated that it it
the wealth of the motion. Correct your spelling
is
This
is to say that today's youth should preserve the ancient culture and tradition for the
future reference. Which can increase the countries popularity. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, a recent government survey in our country has demonstrated that seventy five
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seventy-five
percent
of foreigners want to visit our country "Nepal" due to our ancient and historical traditions and monuments. Change the spelling
per cent
Therefore
, it is known as the wealth of the nation.
On the other hand
, people who oppose this
view feel that every individual has right
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the right
for
freedom. Change preposition
to
In other words
, a person can make their choice either to agree or not without any force. For example
, a recent study of a media channel, NTV has revealed that sixty-five percent
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per cent
the
successful people are living their life as per their desire. For Correct article usage
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this
reason, a person should be free to behave.
Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that traditions of any society are the most valuable treasure; however
, some believe an individuals
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individual
has
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have
right
to make Correct article usage
the right
choises
. Correct your spelling
choices
Therefore
, I wholeheartedly believe that every citizen should play an important role to save our precious tradition for future
generation.Add an article
the future
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