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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

#people #jobs
Nowadays, demand for
the
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careers has risen and many employers
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 chosen their employees who have positive factors which their ages is more important for them.
Although
,
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this
 phenomenon brings a wide range of disadvantages for some
people
, there are some practical ways to prevent these negative aspects.
Firstly
, Many
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new staffs are chosen by some necessary items
such
 as age, which could bring bad news for elderly
people
. But have
this
 way of selection any problems? It means that, due to the lack of enough experiences of the young
people
, they should have mistakes compared with elderly
people
.
then
, their work could lead them in the wrong way.
Secondly
, The money which is given to them should be not important to a person who has higher age. As result, they spend them in some unnecessary ways which are not suitable for them. There is some practical way to having a better job opportunity.
First
 of all, the mixture of the experienced person and young
people
 can bring a lot of benefit for every business and use from both perfusions of middle-age person and energy of youngers at the same time.
Furthermore
, employers must choose their employees based on their skills rather than their ages, which can improve a healthy competition between
people
 at the same job, personally, I believe that many young
people
 have talent which is wasted because of lack of reliability from employers.
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