New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that how teenagers spend their leisure

time

has been changed by cutting-edge innovation. Some people opine that there are many demerits of

this

trend,

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beleive

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believe

that advantages are more than disadvantages of technologies as with

this

innovation children learn about

study

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the study

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and get a wide circle of virtual friend whereas, it creates health issues as well as consuming

time

. On the one hand, automation

have

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great

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a great

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impact on everyone's

life

.

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Children's

Childrens

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Children

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have much range of sources and spend their free

time

on

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surfing

internet

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the internet

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instead

of using

traditionl

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traditional

way like newspaper , radio through which they learn various information

such

as about

wild

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wildlife

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life

so it

boarden

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broaden

broadens

their knowledge.

Moreover

, on social media

applications

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,applications

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young people share their personal stuff

such

as pictures and thoughts ,

that

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which

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helps them to

wide

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widen

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their friend circle .

for instance

, now in

pendamic

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pandemic

period youngsters can not go outside because of covid 19 so they spend most of

time

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the time

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on

instagram

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Instagram

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and

facebook

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Facebook

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apllication

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application

which make easy to interact with their friends.

On the other hand

, as every coin has two sides , technology

also

have

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cons .

Firstly

, because of

virtual

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the virtual

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world , kids spend most of their

time

with

the

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gadgets which

creates

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gap

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a gap

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between their parents and

lifestyle

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their lifestyle

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become sedentary. Apart from

that

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,that

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they started avoiding physical activity which gives to many

disease

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diseases

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like

obessity

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obesity

.

Secondly

, it has

great

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a great

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impact on

health

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the health

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of the kids as they spend spare

time

on mobile and laptops

for

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playing games

that

is

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are

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main

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the main

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reason that

cause

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causes

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health issues to them .

for example

, if these

toddler

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toddlers

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keep

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keeps

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their eyes

guled

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glued

to screen they may suffer from

syptoms

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symptoms

of poor vision and

also

with

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migrain

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migraine

. To conclude, technology

make

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makes

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life

very easy and fast , children utilise their spare

time

effectively but

itt

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it

has disadvantages too which can cause problem to these kids at

early

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an early

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stage of

life

.