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Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

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in recent times
people
 are more attached to social media and follow their favourite actors in real life.
this
 new world is much more concerned about its health, fitness and figure because
people
 like to look better in their social circle. in the upcoming ,paragraphs we will try to cover these issues briefly. it is mostly occurring in the younger generation which is connected to
modern
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 world through their cell phones.
Millenials
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Millennials
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 want to enjoy their life like film stars and actors. nowadays
people
 are becoming fitness
freek
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freak
 and mostly learning dance. the younger generation is fascinated by these celebrities and they are aspiring for the same treatment provided they are financially strong. definitely,
its
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 not right to follow someone blindly, in ,
fact
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the fact
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 that's a blunder mistake
which
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 encourages
millenials
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Millenials
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 to practice unhealthy habits. sometimes individual started smoking to look much more
appeasing
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 to follow friends and ultimately develops
habit
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a habit
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 of it. there are some good things about film stars like a donation for NGO's and charity works. it is important to make a balance between good habits and bad habits. there is an increasing trend of drugs among
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young
people
 which is somehow linked to the life of celebrities serving as
role
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 model for them.
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