The use of cellphones has increased in this twenty-first century. Additionally, Cellphones can now be used for many purposes besides of making calls only. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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In the cutting edge era,
people
can live without food but they cannot live with
mobile
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a mobile
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phone. I will
first
discuss the main merits followed by an analysis of a few inevitable demerits and
finally
will come to a reasoned conclusion. There is an endless list of benefits
people
can get by using
cellphone
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. The most prominent and evitable gift of technology is easiness in daily life. Digital phone can help
people
to earn money and enhance knowledge by using
internet
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.
For example
, on YouTube
channels
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people
can watch different types of videos that can help them in daily life
such
as there are many channels that guide
people
in learning English. Nowadays it is much easier to get employed and create awareness via cellular phone. Except
this
, phones
helps
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people
to be in touch with family and friends even if you cannot visit them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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