the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today
the maps illustrate how
the
grace Correct article usage
apply
park
changed from 1920 the time when it opened until now. Overall,the park
saw a significant development in facilities, also
, many constructions have been removed.
In 1920, there was three rose garden,one of them was located in the north of the park
,which is replaced by a cafe .there was a stage for musicians in the west of the park
, which is replaced by amphitheatre for concerts. A fountain was located in the centre of the park
that is
eliminated,and another rose garden is located instead
of that fountain.Also
, four seats is
constructed around that rose garden.
There is a children's play area Change the verb form
are
next
to the cafe,which is replaced by to pond for water plants.Finally
,there was a glasshouse in the southeast of the park
, which is replaced by a water fountainSubmitted by maleki.ali94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite