you have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who is already knows about that job as well. .Tell what kind of job it is .explain why you applied for this job .ask your friend about the country
Hello Dinesh, Hope you are doing
good
and sound.here I want to discuss a Change the word
well
job
offer that I got in Canada for a Business analyst profile. As wereyou
already aware of Correct your spelling
were you
this
job
,So i
thought to know more about it. Change the capitalization
I
Firstly
, This
job
is purely into data analytics and business intelligence, It mostly deals with the Visualisation and ETL part.As you
aware we completed our AWS certification Add a verb
you are
you were
last
month, It has a major importance in this
firm.As it is a retail supply chain so
the tools used are Power BI, Tableau and qlik.Correct word choice
apply
Whereas
the data stored
in various Dataware houses like Teradata, SQL, Add a missing verb
is stored
Azure
. My role is to fetch the data from the databases and create business insights as per requirement. Correct word choice
and Azure
Secondly
, I wanna move to Canada and settle there.We usually discuss this
rustic and living in a western provincial
is bliss. Replace the word
province
subsequently
the quality of education , Medical treatment, nature-friendly and Add a comma
subsequently,
Job
market are good and appreciable.Allover
, obtaining a Correct your spelling
All over
job
in this
country will lead to a happier life and my
next generations will be thankful in future. Change the word
the
Lastly
, I've seen a lot of your posts on Social platforms regarding this
country.furthermore
, you said you have visited this
country onsite for project work.I would be happy if you could share some details about this
nation.will it be beneficial to move ..what is the scope for
my profile? and points to consider Change preposition
of
while
moving. Looking forward to meeting and
you and awaiting your reply. Correct word choice
apply
your's
friendly Aditya JCorrect the word
yours's
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,