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In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not repent the financial security that marriage country. To what extent do you agree?

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Marriage
 is a beautiful relationship between the two souls and families. There are those who think that girls are
self dependent
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 nowadays and
therefore
 do not need any
monitory
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monetary
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 support that
marriage
 can provide.
Hence
 they wish to
be remain
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 single and free.
This
 is
a
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totally disagrees with the notion and will prove
this
 with compelling arguments.
Firstly
, in
this
 contemporary Eire points are stepping out of three wells and showcase their talents in every field
however
,
marriage
 here never been centric to financial sentences rather it is a relationship between the forms of opposite can't
to
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live a meaningful life. Couples tend to enjoy the tenderness as well as mutual and physical support between each other which is essential for encountering daily services economic problems. More ever it is
law
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 that binds people together and
add
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 value meaning to their
marriage
.
Secondly
, avoiding marriages is against the laws of nature it we pick that a threat of extinction
human
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 beings as family being will be discontinuous by doing so
further more
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 weddings are often
associate
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 with the sole as well as cultural values of the families. To illustrate according to
this
 Hindu mythology giving a daughter in
marriage
 is referred to as a good deed and by doing so the parents will be given
place
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 in heaven
hence
 the
ethical
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 and play a crucial role in
marriage
. To conclude, legal relationships are vital for human society to their
to their
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end to fulfil physical and mental needs economic strengthening should not be considered a sole basis for
marriage
 rather than the sentiments of folks and religious values are the dividing factors
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