Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Following the tradition of their own society is considered as a good character of the youth, according to many. Others believe that they need to
allowed
as per their preference. In my opinion, I support the view latter’ s concept as Change the form of the verb
allow
this
ensure
much freedom in their life.
On the one hand, when Change the verb form
ensures
an
youngster follows his own way of lifestyle is better than forcing them to adopt Change the article
a
cultural
practice that they are not at all interestedAdd an article
a cultural
the cultural
, and
I Change preposition
in, and
agree
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onagree
toagree
withagree
this
. This
is because if anyone can live without hurting others feeling, this
may bring happiness and peacefulness in
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to
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, presently, in the western world, they rarely enforce their people follow
culture as they are hugely supporting personal interest than anything else.
Fix the infinitive
to follow
However
, on the other side, the opponents of the above- mentioned argument say that it is crucial to follow the cultural aspects of the place anyone grows and lives. They tend to believe this
practice strengthens the ties with their roots, cultivates patriotic feeling, ultimately, brings unity as well. Nevertheless
, this
scenario rarely happens. For example
, wherever, citizens are asked to follow the cultural practices often created political turmoil.
In conclusion, although
it is sometimes thought that youngsters need to be practiced
their Change the spelling
practised
culture
beliefs, I firmly think that people should be allowed to decide Replace the word
cultural
Correct your spelling
whether
weather
they want to adopt Correct your spelling
whether
this
on
their life or not.Change preposition
in
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- although
- even though
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