As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Transport
is one of the most active sources of
air
pollution.
Although
today
aviation
is essential (approximately 15 times) is inferior to road
transport
in terms of the
amount
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of pollutants emitted into the
air
; it affects the ecology of the upper troposphere and
lower
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stratosphere every day. Unlike other modes of
transport
,
aviation
travels enormous distances, affecting
air
quality locally, regionally and globally. Most
aviation
fuel is burned outside of
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he
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surface layer near airports
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and in the higher layers of the atmosphere. Experts believe that the annually increasing
emissions
of carbon dioxide, water and methane from commercial
aircraft
engines change the chemical and radiation balance of the atmosphere, which along with the emission of soot sulphate aerosols can affect climate.
Aircraft
emissions
of carbon dioxide make, according to various estimates, from 2 to 2.5% of the total anthropogenic CO2
emissions
into the atmosphere. When 1 kg of
aviation
kerosene is burned, 3.16 kg of CO2 is released. International Organization civil
aviation
is taking measures to reduce the negative
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impact of
aviation
on the environment. For
this
, new standards are being developed that tighten the requirements for operated
aircraft
on
aircraft
noise and
emissions
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and is
also
expanding
list
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of
aviation
emissions
for which certification is carried out
aircraft
engines. Despite the fact that
aviation
, in comparison with others, is a relatively “clean” mode of
transport
, its impact on the climate and the environment can become noticeable over time due to the constantly increasing
air
traffic.
Although
not all airlines support
this
idea, the need to introduce new technologies in the
aviation
industry, contributing to the reduction of the environmental load of
air
transport
to the environment is obvious.
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