As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Over the
last
decades, there
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
been an upward trend of tourists
likewise
there is a climbing demand for more
flights
.
However
, it would be challenging for the environment due to a variety of issues. The objective of
this
essay is to investigate some problems of
flights
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
nature, suggest possible solutions and evaluate them. It is considered that the environmental negative impact of
flights
is tightly connected with
the
Change the article
a
show examples
large number of guests.
In other words
, every flight produces a significant amount of traffic fumes which in turn damage the atmosphere and contributes to climate change.
For instance
, according to the experts,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
aviation accounts approximately 3% of the total greenhouse effect.
Consequently
, the increasing number of individuals travelling by plane will lead to different ecological setbacks.
This
problem could be tackled by limiting
number
Change the article
a number
the number
show examples
of
flights
by leaving only important trips.
On the contrary
,
this
measure might be less possible because it will require updates in
law
Correct article usage
the law
show examples
sphere especially in
“freedom
Correct article usage
the “freedom
show examples
of human” section and agreement of the society.
Moreover
, the solution might be the construction of modern planes which will not release oxide of nitrogen by allocating funds of
government
Add an article
the government
show examples
.
This
measure is likely possible, if government allocate the budget,
this
solution will be
positive
Add an article
a positive
show examples
effect to get rid of
this
challenge. To sum up, all aforementioned points illustrate that despite the gradual rise of tourists, the environment might face
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
serious difficulties due to the
flights
. As far as I am concerned, in future, there will be a range of measurements to prevent air pollution without any restrictions
of
Change preposition
on
show examples
flights
.
Submitted by anjelika-mama on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: