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Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #qualifications #success
Education plays an imperative role in the overall progression of a human. Few individuals of society asserted that academic knowledge aids in getting
succed
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succeed
. Whereas, others
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 that practical skills
are always bring
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always bring
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 success.
This
 essay intends to discuss both the ideologies followed by my opinion. To commence with, some would suggest that real work
experiecne
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experience
 is
essestial
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essential
 for laborious jobs.
This
 is due to, many of occupation
such
 as automobile mechanical and
carpainter
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carpenter
car painter
 requires physical
hardwork
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hard work
 rather than
proffessional
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professional
 skill.
As a result
,
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 of people get work at a very early age to earn
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 amount as compared to those who spent lots of years in their qualification.
For instance
, according to
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 done by the London University in 2019, there was a huge shortage of plumber in America and their government hired millions of skilled worker with minimum education to meet the demand.
Therefore
, it is great evidence
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 shows that skills
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less
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 opportunities to get a
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 job.
On the other hand
, in
this
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modern
 era educational qualifications is
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a fundamental
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 need to
acheive
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achieve
fruitful
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 career. To elucidate,
lerners
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learners
 grab concepts and theoretical knowledge to get eligible for executive jobs.
As most
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of
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organisations
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the organisations
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 offer employment opportunities to
well qualified
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well-qualified
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 people to give higher position.
Hence
, students provided with
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employment in
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reputed
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 company and later
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 they will be promoted
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serior
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senior
superior
 posts.
For instance
, as per recent research done by the Indian newspaper "The Hindu", 85% of
post graduates
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postgraduates
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 recruited in
top most
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 industries as per their interest.
As a result
, unemployment
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 to
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 extend in the nation
consequently
,
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the economy
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 of
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 uplifts. Thereby, academic skills are more essential than practical work to
acheive
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achieve
 better prospects. To conclude,
although
 both the notion has their significant justifications. I am in
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 of those who opine that theoretical knowledge
play
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paramount
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a paramount
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 role in adolescents life to find splendid opportunity in life.
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