Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.Which opinion do you agree with?Discuss both options and give example.

The given table
graph
demonstrates us how many people worked on part-time jobs in 1980 and 2010 in each country of the UK Overall, as can be clearly seen from the
graph
the
amount
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of part-time workers in 2010 was higher than it was in 1980, except Northern Ireland where
figures
of
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2010 were less. As the
graph
shows, in England the number of workers in 1980 was about 25%,
then
the percentages grew up and achieved slightly higher than 30%. Northern Ireland demonstrated
less
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figures
, compared with England, in 1980 and 2010, approximately 25
percent
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and a little higher than 10
percent
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, respectively. Scotland at the beginning had the least percentage ( slightly bigger 10%),
however
, the
figures
increased and they had reached almost 20% by 2010. According to the
graph
, Wales had the highest percentage among all countries. In 1980
figures
attained a little bit higher 30%,
then
in
2010
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they showed about 35%.
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