Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.Which opinion do you agree with?Discuss both options and give example.

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demonstrates us how many people worked on part-time jobs in 1980 and 2010 in each country of the UK Overall, as can be clearly seen from the

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the

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of part-time workers in 2010 was higher than it was in 1980, except Northern Ireland where

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2010 were less. As the

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shows, in England the number of workers in 1980 was about 25%,

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the percentages grew up and achieved slightly higher than 30%. Northern Ireland demonstrated

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, compared with England, in 1980 and 2010, approximately 25

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and a little higher than 10

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, respectively. Scotland at the beginning had the least percentage ( slightly bigger 10%),

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increased and they had reached almost 20% by 2010. According to the

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, Wales had the highest percentage among all countries. In 1980

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attained a little bit higher 30%,

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they showed about 35%.