Some people say that history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps the present. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are so many arguments that
history
does not mean anything for our future or studying past
history
would be helpful for the present. I am going to discuss from both the view and describes my opinions following the sentences.
First
of all, I was born in
Hiroshima
where is very well-known for the tragedy of the
history
of the atomic bomb. Ever since I was born there, my
study
of past
history
was started from school and the Japanese government. People who are living in
Hiroshima
and Nagasaki in Japan are mandatory to
study
the
history
of the atomic bomb and
world
war two. When I was a kid, I honestly hated studying
history
and atomic bombs as one of the members of
Hiroshima
. Because I didn't really understand why we have to learn about
history
for what.
However
, once I started studying abroad in New York, I had a lot of opportunities to discuss atomic bombs with my American friends and my patients in my facility. They showed me their curiosities because I'm one who is educated about atomic bombs and the family member of the victims from
world
war two. We had very good conversations about
history
that were the tragic event,
however
,
history
made me realized the hints that make
this
world
better. It definitely would be helpful for our future not to have any wars again, not to hurt anyone by nuclear weapons.
Therefore
, some people say that
history
is not valuable to learn because of the non-benefits of the present. In my opinions, some people who do not believe in the potential of the
study
of
history
don't have any experience to learn and discuss
history
. They have a kind of narrow visions to share an outsider's perspective on
history
. In my experience, I assume that the
study
of past
history
makes our life better and more valuable. It was unforgettable that post president Obama visited
Hiroshima
and
prayed
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world
peace together. I learned a lot from
history
, no matter what happened we shouldn't kill and hate each other. Once we corporate with each other, the
world
will be changed little by little.
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