In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In few nations, individuals argued that
,
investing a huge amount of money in developing new stations for fast Remove the comma
apply
trains
within cities is essential for a country, Use synonyms
however
, others think, upgrade old public Linking Words
transport
is more necessary and the fund should allocate for it. Use synonyms
This
essay will substantiate both views in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
There are numerous reasons, that Linking Words
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or fast railways are Use synonyms
needs
of the common Correct article usage
the needs
people
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the train plays a vital role in middle-class Linking Words
people
. Through the rail ,Use synonyms
lines
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
travel
daily for various reasons. Use synonyms
For instance
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human being Change preposition
apply
travel
daily by local Use synonyms
trains
, not only some Use synonyms
people
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travel
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also
, some of the Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
travel
for selling food on the railways. In Use synonyms
this
modern era, Linking Words
people
work on the railway Use synonyms
lines
to provide bread and butter to their family. Use synonyms
Besides
, in Linking Words
this
costly word subways are affordable for many masses as compared to public Linking Words
transport
along with, hassle and bustle life routine individuals prefer regime Use synonyms
transport
like the train because it would not cost much and Use synonyms
people
would probably arrive early to Use synonyms
particular
destination. Subways are often used for Add an article
a particular
long
journey and comparatively with Add an article
a long
the long
public
,Add an article
the public
transport
it is Use synonyms
more
cheaper for travelling to Change the word
apply
differnt
states. Correct your spelling
different
In addition
, if the administration Linking Words
look
into upgrading railway Change the verb form
looks
lines
Use synonyms
then
that would be more Linking Words
benefical
for normal Correct your spelling
beneficial
people
to Use synonyms
travel
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, it is not neglectable that public Linking Words
transport
Use synonyms
have
Change the verb form
has
very
good frequency as compared to Add an article
a very
trains
but it is Use synonyms
also
, Linking Words
extremaly
costly. Correct your spelling
extremely
Nevertheless
, if the government spend money on public Linking Words
transport
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
people
would Use synonyms
be use
these more often as compared to train and the economy of the country will collapse. Change the verb form
use
Also
, city transports are good for short journey and it Linking Words
also
available time after time. The Linking Words
survery
Correct your spelling
survey
condected
by Correct your spelling
conducted
indian
rail in 2018 Change the capitalization
Indian
of
public Change preposition
for
transport
and rails uses. The result was quite surprising, 70% of travelling done by railways and only 30% used by public Use synonyms
transport
.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, both have their own preferences but in my opinion, subways are often used for Use synonyms
long
journey and it is more Add an article
a long
the long
affordabel
to Correct your spelling
affordable
middle class
Add a hyphen
middle-class
people
, Use synonyms
moreover
, Linking Words
government
must have Add an article
the government
invest
more amount in Change the verb form
invested
improveing
rail Correct your spelling
improving
lines
.Use synonyms
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