In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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railways
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are eco
frienday
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friendly
and government must have invest amount on it rather than
construction
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of
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. I completely agree that spending
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on railway developments are
extremaly
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extremely
good for
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reducing
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reducting
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reducing
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polluction
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pollution
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relevant examples. There are numerous benefits
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money
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on
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railways
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Firstly
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,
railways
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are eco friendly and it is
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usable and affordable for
eveyone
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everyone
. Individuals travel a lot by train mostly on summer holidays and it is a ministry
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so as
compaired
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compared
with private
wehicals
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vehicles
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the cost of it would
extremly
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extremely
defer.
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, the survey
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conducted
by regime usages of
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government vs private
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throughout
year
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the year
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. The result shows, 70% of individuals
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their own
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for travelling within
city
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the city
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,
however
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, for travelling
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different
state or city they
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public
transport
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.
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, private
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use
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by masses 30% and 70% useses of
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government
transport
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because of rates and safety.
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, if authority
spend
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spends
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money
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on
roads
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building
then
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more and more people
uses
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their own
vehicles
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to travel and that brings excessive air pollution. In the developed cities people
use
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private
vehicles
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more often cause, shortage of public transports, limited time, as well as hygiene issues. If the
govenment
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government
will look into these types of issue
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public
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the public
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will start using
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.
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, Mumbai has been investing
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an equal
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amount of
money
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on
roads
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along with,
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yet, they more look into
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. One
articale
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article
gives information about Mumbai local trains, have multiple trains for
perticular
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particular
destination within 10 minutes of difference, and
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for eco-friendly, cost
effictive
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effective
and frequency of
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. To conclude, considering above mentioned
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points
, it is evident that,
govenment
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government
must pay out for building
railways
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as
compare
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compared
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to
roads
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, which cope up with pollutions and makes energy-saving travel.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • investment
  • urban mobility
  • commuters
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • accessibility
  • rejuvenate
  • cost-effective
  • traffic congestion
  • economic sustainability
  • tourism
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