In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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railways

are eco

frienday

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friendly

and government must have invest amount on it rather than

construction

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roads

. I completely agree that spending

money

on railway developments are

extremaly

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extremely

good for

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reducting

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reducing

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polluction

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pollution

collection

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relevant examples. There are numerous benefits

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money

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railways

Firstly

railways

are eco friendly and it is

also

usable and affordable for

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everyone

. Individuals travel a lot by train mostly on summer holidays and it is a ministry

transport

so as

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compared

with private

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vehicles

vehicle

the cost of it would

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extremely

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conducted

by regime usages of

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government vs private

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throughout

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. The result shows, 70% of individuals

use

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however

, for travelling

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different

state or city they

use

public

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, private

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by masses 30% and 70% useses of

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government

transport

because of rates and safety.

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money

roads

building

then

more and more people

uses

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their own

vehicles

to travel and that brings excessive air pollution. In the developed cities people

use

private

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more often cause, shortage of public transports, limited time, as well as hygiene issues. If the

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government

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will start using

railways

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, Mumbai has been investing

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amount of

money

roads

along with,

railways

yet, they more look into

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. One

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gives information about Mumbai local trains, have multiple trains for

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particular

destination within 10 minutes of difference, and

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for eco-friendly, cost

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effective

and frequency of

railways

. To conclude, considering above mentioned

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points

, it is evident that,

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government

must pay out for building

railways

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, which cope up with pollutions and makes energy-saving travel.

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