Some people think that the only way to have a success in business is to have a unique product. What factors, do you think, influence the success of a company?

Nowadays, a section of society believes that success can be measured by only having unique items in their store.I completely disagree with
this
view,
However
, there are lot more factors that influence the
customers
, having the uniqueness of the
products
is just
one
of them.I shall examine
the
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some factors on
this
in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,commercials and advertisement are essential to grab the attention of the
customers
.
This
influence the people
mind set
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to buy those items while
their
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are shopping.
However
,
customers
are much choose
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about their particular brands.
For example
,
a
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Apple company has
advertise
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their
product
in the market.
Therefore
, same as the other
products
like Nokia,Vivo, oppo so on.
As a result
,
sallers
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sellers
sales
for
the
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Apple company
products
are always high.Due to the brand value in the market.
Secondly
, the quality of
product
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gives the
customers
satisfaction it can
also
improves
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the resales of those items.
Moreover
,
thesedays
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these days
alot
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a lot
lot
of
companys
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companies
are coming up with
a different offers
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different offers
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like the
one
plus
one
offer with
product
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and giving free item with other
products
also
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all these helps them to attract the clients which improve their
sales
.For instances, In normal days the
sales
are quit
contanst
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content
with the
companys
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company
company's
.Whereas, in the festival sessions are any
sales
days the range of the
salese
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sales
sale
were
quit
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high in number
,
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because customer
attract
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for the offers on those days. In conclusion, advertising of the
product
is
one
of the key
point
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also
with the brand value in the society.
Therefore
, the quality of the item
also
increases the
sales
and the offers will play a wide role
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business.
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