Some people think that the only way to have a success in business is to have a unique product. What factors, do you think, influence the success of a company?

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Nowadays, a section of society believes that success can be measured by only having unique items in their store.I completely disagree with

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to buy those items while

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are shopping.

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customers

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about their particular brands.

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Apple company has

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their

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in the market.

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, same as the other

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like Nokia,Vivo, oppo so on.

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sellers

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Apple company

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are always high.Due to the brand value in the market.

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gives the

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the resales of those items.

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these days

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and giving free item with other

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all these helps them to attract the clients which improve their

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are quit

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high in number

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because customer

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for the offers on those days. In conclusion, advertising of the

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with the brand value in the society.

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business.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

unique product
market demand
innovation
value proposition
target audience
market research
brand awareness
customer retention
word-of-mouth referrals
financial management
budgeting
profit margins
strong leadership
motivated team
productive work environment
embracing technology
competitive advantage
fast-changing market
effective marketing strategies
customer service excellence

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Fully explain your ideas

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g. goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development.

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