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in some countries when no longer feel the need to get married, as they are able to earn three own income and do not have to rely on the financial security that marriage can bring. in other countries people still consider marriage to be an important institution that should always be respected. dicuss both points of view and give your one opinion,

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Marriage is an
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eternal
 relationship between two people and is
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considered
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 to be the most sacred human relation. Whilst there are two contradicting views, where some countries consider marriage is required for an individual to lead a fruitful
life
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 since the individuals are financially independent to sustain their livelihood. Notwithstanding some merits of later view opinion is that
this
 union of two people is
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 in an individual's
life
. Explicated below are my perspectives on both these views and the basis of my belief. On the one hand, the contention that not getting married if both the individuals are financially stable may have perceptible benefits of avoiding legal and social liabilities of the partner by
avoding
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avoiding
 getting into a socio-legal contract of
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.
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, it lacks the conviction of mental support for your companion. To illustrate
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 of the crimes committed by the person out of frustration.
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mental support and is
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 for everybody. On the other
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hand
, the counterview has apparent benefits of commitment and companionship which is mandatory to have a healthy and fruitful
life
. To substantiate
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 of having a companion may not be useful in the
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initial
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life
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adulthood and move towards
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old age. We need an individual to share our thoughts and our personal space.
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, I am of the opinion that
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 is very important and should not be measured with financial standards. In conclusion, having elucidated both the views and anecdotal evidence presented in support of my assertions. I would like to recommend that the institution of
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 is essential and should always be respected.
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