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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Many organizations have terms and conditions that their
work force
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 must put on selective identical
dress
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 during their
office
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time
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. The main benefits of these are staff do not need to spend
time
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 to select which
dress
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 to wear before
office
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 and they can save money from their budget on clothes;
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, the key drawbacks are the
work force
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 find it monotonous to carry same attire
everyday
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 and might grow dissatisfaction on
specific
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color
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. Wearing
same
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dress
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everyday
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 helps personnel to save
time
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 because they don’t need to think about which
dress
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 they should wear. They can use
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time
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 with more productive work and get adequate
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 to spend with their family and friends.
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, uniforms save
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 amount of money because for regular
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 wear employees don’t need to purchase clothing.
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 they need to put on
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dress
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 every day, identical
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 saves their money by not purchasing
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 number of formal
dress
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, Harvard University published a recent survey on
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 outfit that female staff of an organization spend
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 of their income on
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 outfit.
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, employees are disappointed by wearing
same
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everyday
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 because they find it monotonous by covering themselves with
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dress
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 because they find it uninteresting to wear repetitive
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everyday
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 but due to company practice, they have to maintain that.
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, wearing
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color
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 regularly make a dissatisfaction
on
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 that specific
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color
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 because nobody
like
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 to carry
same
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color
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 every day.
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, in my school
days
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 I deter blue
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color
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 because my school uniform was blue,
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 blue is a beautiful
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color
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, for regular usage it became my less
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color
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. In conclusion, wearing uniform is good practice in
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 because it saves employee from
unnecessary
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 expense on clothing and
save
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time
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,
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, same
dress
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everyday
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 might bring some mental dissatisfaction like fatigue or devours on
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color
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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