Some people believe that money is more important than free time for a good quality of life. Others say the opposite is true. Discuss both views. What is more important in your opinion? Give relevant examples.
Few people
beleive
that only Correct your spelling
believe
money
is more Use synonyms
valuabe
and can provide good quality of Correct your spelling
valuable
life
compared to free Use synonyms
time
. In my Use synonyms
opinion
free Add a comma
,opinion
time
is more valuable than Use synonyms
money
to lead a happy and quality Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
Money
can be earned anytime but Use synonyms
Use synonyms
time
we can regain it. Add an article
the time
Upcoming
paragraph will give Add an article
The upcoming
An upcoming
further
information related to my opinion.
Yes , Linking Words
i
agree that to lead Change the capitalization
I
a
sophisticated Remove the article
apply
life
Use synonyms
money
is important, but to continue to have that Use synonyms
life
they have to work hard each and every moment for Use synonyms
whole
Correct pronoun usage
their whole
life
without enjoying what they have earned and Use synonyms
also
they will not have Linking Words
few
memorable Correct article usage
a few
momemnts
with their loved ones. Correct your spelling
moments
For instance
, Linking Words
Film
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in Film
celebraties
, They need to travel all the Correct your spelling
celebrities
time
Use synonyms
to
outdoor for Change preposition
apply
stooting
and to earn Correct your spelling
shooting
money
due to which they cannot stay for Use synonyms
long
period with their family and Correct article usage
a long
also
can spend Linking Words
time
for Use synonyms
self
.But we change Correct pronoun usage
themselves
this
by limiting our works and by giving priority to family than Linking Words
money
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
person
with free Add an article
a person
the person
time
, Use synonyms
This
man can plan his Linking Words
time
with family , Use synonyms
self growth
and Add a hyphen
self-growth
also
spend some Linking Words
time
on his hobbies to lead and pleasant and Use synonyms
happly
Correct your spelling
happy
happily
life
with his own rules. Use synonyms
Money
is Use synonyms
also
important to survive but not as much as Linking Words
time
. We can earn Use synonyms
money
which Use synonyms
help
us feed and get what is is needed. Change the verb form
helps
For example
, Workers in factories or any other Linking Words
industies
, Correct your spelling
industries
they
are happy with the income they earn and Correct pronoun usage
apply
spendthe
remaining available Correct your spelling
spend the
time
with family.
In conclusion, In each and every person Use synonyms
life
Use synonyms
money
and Use synonyms
time
plays Use synonyms
a
main role and are important. But when compared in between them , We can't get Change the article
the
time
which is lost but can earn Use synonyms
money
which we don't have. So Use synonyms
Time
is more important than Use synonyms
money
Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite