Holding international games like the Olympic games is an exciting event. Some people thinks it has positive effects while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that hosting some international sports ceremony like the Olympic is a thrilling event rather than wasting money. In
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essay, I will discuss both views and m opinion.
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, as different countries sportsperson participate their fans come from all over the world to support them, which apprises the tourist industry income. Linking Words
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directly or indirectly builds the economy of the country.
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To conclude there are both advantages and disadvantages of these events but clearly, pros outweigh cons.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite