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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spent most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no doubt that these days
as a result
 of occupied life currently, a lot of girls and boys consumed major of their times inside their houses and have minimal exploring to our planet. In
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 I am going to discuss the importance of exploring and learning from
nature
.
Firstly
,
nature
 has many valuable impacts on children to illustrate that, younger people could learn from travelling to other country or nation new hobbies or skills.
for example
, a boy or girl who lived in
a
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hot weather which has no cold weather can travel to a colder country for ice skating schools to understand and mastering ice skating.
Furthermore
, a child who spends most of his or her time outdoors with friends can learn from each other as when they play soccer together they will understand teamwork. 
Secondly
, as understanding and appreciation of
nature
 have a lot of benefits of learning
also
nature
 and getting outdoors play major rules in psychological and physical effects on children.
For instance
, youngers who playing together any type of game
instead
 of just learning from the game
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 sport can lower childhood obesity and diabetes as well as can strengthen mental health.
last
 but not least, the child can learn from wildlife and
nature
 as he or she can learn from animals to exemplify, they can learn from animals in the way of their behaviour, surviving and, coexistence to strengthen the child. In conclusion, as many things that the juvenile could learn from
nature
 life,
thus
, spending a long time exploring and discovering
nature
 would invigorate and harden children.
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