Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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reckon that

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must be put in jail and it is not important that which kind of crime they have done.

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, there are some

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who believe that if we educate

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and expose them to suit learning and training, it would be more effective than traditional punishments. As contraventional as

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statement is, we will discuss both views. In the modern era, a considerable number of

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are agree

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opinion that

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should be trained

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punished. According to statistics, most of the

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are young

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and

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is obvious that if we provide these persons with

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appropriate education, they can be useful for their community downing the road; because of that

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these educational

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.

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number of

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who insist on

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idea that we should put all

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in jail and they believe that traditional punishments

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more practical than educational

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. I reckon that

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numerous

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have experienced poverty, addiction and other same problems;

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young

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may be raped or beaten in prisons and I think these issues cause that

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more aggressive. So, when they release from prison, they will revenge

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and society.

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, let me

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opinion has mentioned

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paragraph. To summarize, nowadays, governments are moving toward doing preventative

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instead

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of focus on just putting

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in prison. In my opinion, we should sentence

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to prison or suit training according to their crime and certainly educational

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will be more practical than putting

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jail.