Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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reckon that if

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provides

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with educational measures, it would be more effective than putting them in

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jail.

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, there are some persons who believe in traditional measures and

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. As contraventional as

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statement is, we will discuss both views in

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essay. But, what do you think? Offenders should be trained or they should be put in prison? In my view, nowadays, we had better provide

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appropriate training to

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according to the

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they have committed. Statistics indicate that most

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criminals

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the criminals

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in

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all over the world are young

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; because of that, I think that if these young offenders

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learnt, they would be useful for their communication certainly.

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, there are

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who insist on traditional

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such

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as putting

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in prison or executing them. According to

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some reports, most

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persons

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the persons

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who commit a

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have some soluble problems like addiction, poverty, depression and several other issues that can be lead to

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. In my opinion, if government consider these issues and provides preventative measures, the rate of

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will decrease in societies. Needless to say, approximately all of

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punishments

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are aggressive and those offenders who have punished in

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way actually when

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release from prison they will return to

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with

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of anger. To summarize, learning

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has

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many advantages despite classic

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. I reckon that it will be more practical that we train lawbreakers

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of putting them in jail.