Although families have influence on a children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree with this?

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,

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affect their growth.

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, external factors from outside of the house

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have a greater

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on them.

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and siblings

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the

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children’s

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growth more significantly because

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spend most of the time with them and earliest education

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provided by them, but there

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some external impact from

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.

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and siblings could affect

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children’s

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development more significantly

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various reasons.

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,

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spend most of the time with their

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at

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from they were babies.

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makes

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tend to imitate their

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at

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.

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is the reason why the psychologist

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the

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to be careful at their doings in front of their

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as not to get angry easily or talk

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out loud

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other in front of the

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.

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,

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are the

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the teacher in every

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life. In fact, from the

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word, or language the babies learned until good manner and socializing skills are learned from their

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.

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, some external factors might hold some levels of

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too. Internet

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accessed through smartphone or computer, provide

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information

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absorbed by the

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and sometimes interesting materials from the internet could make

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children’s

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surf the sites all day. Even online games could demotivate

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to study at

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. Other than that, friends at school or around

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might

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change the

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children’s

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behavior

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.

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, if when their friends invite them to skip the class,

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they could really do that

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even though

it is forbidden by their

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at

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. In conclusion,

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even though

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a significant

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on

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development, it can not be denied that external factors might affect them too. I think it is

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responsibility to educate the

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and supervise them wisely so that the

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would listen more to their

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.