Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Agriculture has been much easier with advanced infrastructure as compared to the past.
Although
, farmers are growing bumper crops, the
population
of the world is
also
continuously increasing.
Thus
, most of the time civics are unable to manage the distribution of grain. Automation and large capacity storage places can solve
this
problem.
This
essay will point out how inclined
population
is the main cause of hunger and how information
technology
will use to get a better solution. There are might be many reasons for the lacks of
meal
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.
However
, the main root of all causes is uncontrolled
population
. There has been
dramatically
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changes
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in the agriculture-based
technology
in the
last
two decade. The
food
industry
reach
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a new record in every new financial year which means farmers are giving their best and providing tones of foodstuff to their suppliers and other consumers.
However
, many people do not consume it!, because countries like, India, China, Brazil which is highly populated are unable to distribute these grains to their poor citizens. On the other side developed countries with less
population
are easily managed their cuisine supply chain.
Thus
, most of the time there are no issues with the production of
food
but due to the number of people is hard to supply to the neediest. Two main solutions apply can easily be implemented in the current system.
First
is the use of information
technology
that can help to maintain the data of consumer with their monthly supply. Nowadays, almost everyone has a mobile phone as the department can send a message or a phone call to consumer to know about required
food
.
For example
, the Orissa
food
department has a mobile phone application
which
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sent a notification on 1st day of the month to cardholders ( provided by the department) to collect their
food
from
nearest
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stores.
Moreover
, Government has grains but they do not have proper storage systems. Resolutely, tones of
food
is destroyed by
food
agencies because it is not eatable. So, large capacity and well managed with automation warehouses should be constructed by civic. In conclusion,
Although
, the
population
is very hard to control, good quality
food
can be delivered to needy people if governments take initiative to secure
food
in warehouses. Information
technology
can help to provide grains on time.
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