Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion, citing examples form your experience.

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for any period. we can learn more knowledge from past events.
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, a fair amount of
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past
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is a primary factor and we are able to analyse and understand the current time.
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waste or important we can see that.
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, optimistic
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say that
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is nothing and we do not give more attention. Because
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can not tell reliable and truthful information.
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, past records
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like empty pot and
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is nothing to say any important matter or information. we do not need to know and learn past historical
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us
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as day-to-day life and we are not able to apply any olden days record too. In
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modern era, we have
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of choices in order to
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, many students would not like to study
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because they get bored when studying
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. Because
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interesting
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we can not do anything at present time. If we have any model and reference of past
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we can learn more from
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,
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is helped to avoid past mistake will not do in future. Irrefutably without past not
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present.
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, olden days record helps to
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mistake
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every person.
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,
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is the only evidence of success and problem of past decades life.
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, every country would like to maintain friendliness to their neighbour country Because of world war one and two
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is a key factor for our current life.
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not worthless and meaningless.
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, these historical event helps to forecast mistake. we should respect and understand our ancient
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arts, business, and other factors
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only is the proof of past days
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how to manage problem how to find
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solution
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diseases
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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