TOPIC 3: Rich people should pay higher taxes so that poor people will have more opportunity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It
is often argue
that Change the verb form
is often argued
wealth
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wealthy
people
should pay huge amount of taxes
and other
side untoward Correct article usage
the other
people
would have more benefits and chances. But affulant
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affluent
person
has more property and asset there fore
they pay Correct your spelling
therefore
vast
quantity of Add an article
the vast
a vast
taxes
but under poverty line person
they will suffer to survive for their daily earning. I strongly agree with this
statement because rich people
they
do Correct pronoun usage
apply
nt
have any other alternatives chances to ignore in order to they should pay Correct your spelling
not
taxes
.
To begin
with, there are many
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much
reason
for poor Change to a plural noun
reasons
people
can obtain more advantages from rich people
pay taxes
. Firstly
, government
provide all facilities for common
public Add an article
the common
such
as road facilities, healthcare, and etc. They do not separate who is paying higher tax
and who is not paying? Secondly
, our government
law is provided clearly only rich people
are being paid taxes
it is depends
on their having asset. Irrefutably every ministry is Change the verb form
depends
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ruined
runned
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run
people
tax
. For example
, Indian
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the Indian
government
is provided laws and regulation for their civilians which is annual income less
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of less
then
sixty thousand Replace the word
than
earn
who Change to a plural noun
earns
people
they do not pay any taxes
.
Moreover
, rich people
is
helped to develop the country which is paying more Change the verb form
are
taxes
. There fore
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Therefore
rulling
party can provide all Correct your spelling
ruling
best
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the best
fecilities
for their resident other side Correct your spelling
facilities
richless
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richness
people
are being used whole facilities without paying taxes
. For example
, developed countries rules are very strict compare than
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to
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Asian
asian
part Correct article usage
the asian
such
as taxes
. their all people
should pay for tax
not only the wealth
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wealthy
person
but also
poor person
too.
To conclude, inevitably affulant
folks are being paid Correct your spelling
affluent
massive
amount of Add an article
a massive
taxes
in order to would get more chances to untoward
public without paying Add an article
the untoward
taxes
. However
, tax
is only for country development purpose so any one
will give that who rich Correct your spelling
anyone
people
. Moreover
, the government
law must change in the future such
as all people
should pay taxes
this
means how much quantity of asset they having and
annual earning -based too. Correct your spelling
an
Weather
minimum amount or maximum it does not matter.Correct your spelling
Whether
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