Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Agree or Disagree?
Crime
ratio will Correct article usage
The crime
be reduce
when mistake should be punished. It is often argued that whether Change the verb form
be reduced
adoloscent
is done any offence they should be punished like Correct your spelling
adolescent
mature
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a mature
person
. A fair amount of people think that undoubtably
youth should be punished like Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
adult
when they are done Add an article
an adult
illegal
mistake while we never will forgive to the youth Add an article
an illegal
person
. I strongly agree with this
statement because age
does not matter to punished besides
we think about their crime
rate
only so irrefutably teenage person
should be punished the same way as grown
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a grown
person
.
On the one hand, inevitably penalty
ration
will increase automatically crimes ratio reduced whether adolescent, grown-up. Some clever criminals who teen easily will Correct your spelling
ratio
esacape
why their Correct your spelling
escape
age
does not complete mature age
even they have done serious offence such
as rape case, murder and etc. our law
also
will help for their release from deep penalty
. Therefore
defenetly
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definitely
youung
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young
person
should be punished when they have been done serious
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the serious
a serious
crime
. This
only will decline the crime
rate
otherwise
will increase. For example
, the Gulb
countries Correct your spelling
Gulf
Gulab
law
are very strict nobody never
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ever
escape
from Change the verb form
escapes
penalty
whether under adult
, adult
. Therefore
these
nation Correct determiner usage
this
crime
rate
is not much compare
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is not much compared
other
parts of Change preposition
to other
teh
world.
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On the other hand
, when under matured person
will be afraid about heavy penalty
while they never do any breaking law
action. this
means government law
will threaten to
all Change preposition
apply
age
group especially the
criminals. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, accroding
to the survey said that more than 50% of teenager does Correct your spelling
according
many
serious offence Replace the quantifier
much
activity
but they are not punished heavily Change to a plural noun
activities
because
their Add the preposition
ofbecause
age
.
To conclude, every nation will be patient without doing any voilation
in order to any Correct your spelling
violation
person
should be punished when they have done crime
action. We must change our laws for all criminals. This
means noone
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no one
none
esacpe
from punishment. Whether youth, Correct your spelling
escape
adult
it does not matter about the age
it means for the crime
rate
so undoubtably
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undoubtedly
person
should be punished like grown-up
.Add an article
a grown-up
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