One good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sports

is one of the primary need for every nation in order to they are conducting international games shows. Many people argue that global physical events

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the best route to stimulate global will be calmness. I strongly agree with

this

statement because

this

is

a

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best idea for all

countries

avoid

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to avoid

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antipathy to

other

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another country

other countries

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country

in order to

this

will make friendliness

with in

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within

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each

country

.

To begin

with, there are many reasons to accept

this

trend because

of

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this

is the super way to support

within

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each

countries

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Firstly

, international physical recreation can make friendliness with other

country

government as well as people. The

sports

host

country

will invite to all around the

world

country

players

.

Therefore

they ignore unwanted

voilation

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violation

within the

countries

.

That is

why

this

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these

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types of games are conducted more.

Moreover

, we can see some

countries

are

inviteted

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invited

to neighbour

country

players

for their

country

visiting as well as

sports

playing

this

means friendly

competitation

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competition

.

For example

, the international cricket club is organised every five years once in

world

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a world

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cup match while some

country

players

will participate and collaborate with other

country

players

in order to make friendliness.

Furthermore

, international

sports

is the best way to stop any offence

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In addition

,

sports

person are being one of the

compromise

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person

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people

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of

avoid

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avoiding

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any

voilence

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violence

with in

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within

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all

countries

.

For instance

, a

foot ball

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football

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player who Ronaldo mercy. He is

a

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best player

to

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around the

world

. he has huge fans following not only his own

country

fans but

also

differnt

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different

parts of the

world

fans too. To conclude, irrefutably international

sports

function can get peace in

this

world

.

This

can lead to

crating

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good contact

with in

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within

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each

country

such

as

asian

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countries

.

This

is the best way to encourage and support

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with in

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within

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each

country

. I personally support

this

positive trend because we would like to live in a lack of

troble

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trouble

world

so we should respect and love each

ecountry

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country

.