Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

Economic

development

is merely important for the world. It provides multiple opportunities

to

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countries to grow in different sectors.

Nonetheless

, there are some disadvantages of those improvements.

This

advancement is

responsable

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responsible

for the adrift of social values. According to my point of

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economic

development

merits are more

valuneable

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valuable

as disadvantages can be reduced by proper solutions.

Although

there are many benefits of fiscal

development

, two of them are

essestial

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essential

to maintain the economy and to boost the living standard of

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country's

county's

countary's

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citizens .

Firstly

, the rich country can provide basic needs

such

as

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food, shelter and

medical

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to people for survival.

Therefore

,

population

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can easily maintain their life in the state.

Secondly

,

the

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industrial

development

is very vital to provide

an

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employment to workers . If a

countary

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country

county

has sufficient asserts to grow and to establish new industries,

this

investment will provide help to

particular

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region through

finicial

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financial

improvement. So, both of these prosperities

helps

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to

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the country and the earth for the proper

development

of

a

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indiviual

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individual

person in many ways. On the

othe

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other

side, there are some disadvantages of economic progress and that can

be solve

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by unions and the community. Pollution is a major issue

that is

always

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raised

aroused

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by social workers. Whereas industries have a lot of gains,

effect

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on climate can not be

ingored

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ignored

. The government should create proper laws for industrialists so that they can follow those strictly and

lookafter

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look after

the atmosphere.

Moreover

, most of

times

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employers put pressure on their

empolyees

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employees

to do overtime without any pay to match the target. Some Governments are

ingnored

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ignored

this

issue because they are getting political funds from

onwers

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owners

of factories.

However

, due to

this

, many mental and health issues

are bring

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up in

human

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body.

Thus

, the civic and industrialist should introduce a handsome wage

pattran

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pattern

for all employees who work extra. In conclusion,

the

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economic

development

is contributing to give a new direction to

world

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. There

are

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some problem that can

be figure

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out by

efforts

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of

law makers

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lawmakers

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.