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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Travelling to unknown natural regions is possible for
people
 who tend to research or be
tourists
, which brings
people
 some benefits and drawbacks. I think the advantages of
this
 development outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, there is a couple of negative effects for the natural environments. Primarily, when the
tourists
 go to a place not discovered before, might harm the natural environment.
That is
, the more tourist visit unknown area, the more natural balance are influenced remarkably. It can cause some environmental pollution and the local
people
 are negatively affected in the long term. Equally importantly, foreigners can encounter local diseases when they go to remote natural
areas
. It means
,
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 visitors can lose their health as long as they visit unknown places. It is fact that some viruses spread from untouched natural
areas
;
therefore
, not only do local
people
 are influenced by foreigners
,
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 but
also
 visitors can be affected by some untouched places.
On the other hand
, travelling the new
areas
 provides scientists and
tourists
 with some benefits to discover knowledge and untouched places. The prime advantage is that scientists can discover new species in the undiscovered environment. Put simply, discovering a new kind of living things provides
people
 to preserve themselves against unknown dangers. Another benefit is that local
people
 can improve their financial conditions when foreign visitors visit their
areas
. Tourism plays a vital role in some local
areas
. Take some islands where the
tourists
 choose for a holiday as a clear example; had not the islands discovered in the past, the local
people
 would not have reached the public welfare. In conclusion,
although
 travelling to a remote environment has some negative effects, I do believe that the benefits more than drawbacks.
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