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People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than who prefer watching TV. To what extent do you agree?

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Many
people
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 were thought that a good fancy mind and expert in
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 which from reading rather than watching
TV
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. In my view, I partially agree with the argument above and several supportive details will be discussed in
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 essay.
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 with, reading would bring a lot of happiness meanwhile has fancy thinking when holding a drama or story scenario. When a person concentrates to read the story's content without any picture, it would lead the
people
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 to start to imagine the scenery and keep it in their mind.
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, go through reading would learn some new words we never knew before.
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, the Harry Potter storybook was considered popular for every age and they can read and self-thinking about the scene they own created to involve more interesting in reading.
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, learn a
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 from a paper-based tool is difficult compared to others due to not proper clues that we have to learn a correct
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 from that, it is hard to accurate when we need to improve the
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.
On the other hand
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, for looking upgrade the
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 skills and get expert in a new
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, that probably is
TV
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. The speakers speak more native and natural,
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,
people
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 are easier to understand and learn from them.
TV
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 has provides a high resolution in an animation motion way and produces a clear sound at the same time. To corrective the pronunciation,
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,
people
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 can via program to copy the way speaker speak and improve the pronunciation, it is very useful for those who want to update the
language
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 skills they need.
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, the sight when watching
TV
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 can give us enjoyment, sometimes drama has released the trailer to let individuals think and imagine the
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 development of the drama. From
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, we
also
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 can have a good training our brain to think. In conclusion, both reading and watching are a good combination to get expert in skill learning in
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 and imagination.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • language skills
  • active engagement
  • visualize
  • stimulates
  • sentence structures
  • vocabulary
  • styles of writing
  • grammatical structures
  • cognitive and analytical skills
  • self-paced learning
  • comprehension and retention
  • visual and auditory stimuli
  • attention span
  • informative and entertaining
  • passive
  • demanding
  • interpret and create meaning
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