Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was brought from a shops and restaurant. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

Food
is
basic
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necessity of all human beings,
however
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most people in urban areas particularly in
developed
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world,
food
waste
is a major concern.
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essay will explain how high salary is a major factor in
food
wastage and how public awareness can help solve
this
issue. High income is a major factor behind the rise in
food
waste
.Nowadays, most of the people have a high salary of income which means a big salary is allocated to buy more foods or eat in their favourite restaurant. For ,instance 20 years ago, the average family has around 100$ per month to spend on
food
and entertainment,
however
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in today's
society
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one family has a 1000$ a month for groceries only,so the idea of buying something which
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not important or not consuming is unremarkable. the family who eats in the restaurant doesn't care about the leftover
food
because they already paid for it.
This
is a major reason why
food
wastage is dramatically increasing and it's a major concern in society. Solving these issues
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involves local authorities and leaders of the community. They should make a campaign or social awareness about the impact of
waste
food
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our environment and discuss the importance of
food
in other countries.
For example
in some part of
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Africa, millions of children died because of malnourishment.one of the problems in
this
country is the shortage of
food
. African natives use mud as a basic ingredient of making bread in order to sustain their need for
food
.
In
addition
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community leaders can educate people better on practical matters
such
as shopping smarter and cooking enough amount of
food
. In conclusion, giving campaign and public awareness by local authorities can lessen
food
waste
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • overbuying
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • meal planning
  • food preservation
  • cultural norms
  • social norms
  • storage techniques
  • distribution systems
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