The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that the use of particle to may be incorrect here.
The singular quantifier every is followed by the plural noun parts. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.
The indefinite article, an, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun employment in your sentence. Consider removing it.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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