The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

It is often argued that in poor countries, secondary
education
should be limited to only those pupils who could find a
job
easily. I completely agree with the statement because wasting time
for
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higher studies would make a person
to
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lose precious time and experience to learn a new skill and
instead
children should be given opportunities to join for some vocational courses.
Firstly
, in a nation where unemployment is high, getting a
job
is difficult.
Moreover
, the employees look for specific skills, which require years of experience.
Therefore
, if a person goes to a secondary
school
and
then
choose to work, which doesn't require high-
school
education
, he has indirectly wasted his time at the
school
.
For example
, working as a mason does not need any formal
education
;
hence
if a person goes to
school
for many years and lands up to do masonry works, had wasted years of his life in studies.
Secondly
, children should be taught in vocational high schools after primary schooling. Since, in these places, the wards learn many techniques like painting, carpentry etc., which in future for them would be a source of income for the family.
Furthermore
, these skills provide
job
opportunities for people in rich Gulf or European nations.
For instance
, skilled workers from India are in demand worldwide and one could see an Indian in every
parts
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of the world. In conclusion, in countries with poor socio-economic background, getting
an
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employment after secondary
education
is challenging. So, youngsters should stop studies after primary
school
and join for some
job
oriented courses or start working early to improve their skills.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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