Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?

The youngsters are the backbone of every nation. They will build the
next
generation in the future. Nowadays young persons are well educated compare to before
days
. A fair amount of
people
think that current
days
adolescents
are hold
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more
awarness
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awareness
and analysed many things compare to old generations
such
as environment,
poverty
, animal welfare and etc.
However
, I strongly believe
this
statement because these
days
an adult haS more worry and scrutinize about
many
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any
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problem
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problems
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.
To begin
with, irrefutably in
this
modern era
people
are concerned about nature and they would like to know about surrounding problems. Is
this
a positive development? the answer is yes.
Matured
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person is being more
concioused
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conscious
to protect our environment problem in order to they are able to contribute the society how their
activity based
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such
as reduce the pollution but it is not possible for
previous
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the previous
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period.
Therefore
, today folks are done more
plant
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trees in their home as well as
society
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.
For example
,
the
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Indian state of Tamilnadu an adult was done the world record of planting many plants in one place along with
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one day
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.
Furthermore
,
poverty
is the most
dengerous
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dangerous
things
such
as killing disease. Before
days
folks were being affected
poverty
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by poverty
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but nowadays adolescent are very intelligent because they cleverly know about how to increase their
livinghood
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living hood
in order to stop
poverty
. In ,addition, current living man has more saving habits for their future and they are good at managing financial compare to past.
Moreover
, the most
imporatnt
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important
one is animal welfare.
this
issue
also
the teens are handled top-notch outweigh the olden stage generation. These
days
teenager creates more
awarness
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awareness
about animal welfare
such
documantary
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documentary
, films, project and etc.
For example
,
in
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nowdays
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nowadays
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many
hollywood
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Hollywood
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movies are taken related to species of creatures
such
as birds, animals, insects in
ordetr
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order
to they are being created the
bondness
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boldness
fondness
of animals and
people
even wild animals
also
. To conclude, ancient generation
people
had
ability
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to handle
this
problem but
modern
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guy has a lot of ability and
knowdledge
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knowledge
about their nature as well as their personal life too.
Hence
, undoubtedly our
youngesters
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youngsters
are the best saviour and superman to stop
this kinds
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this kind
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of troubles compare to our
grand parents
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grandparents
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period.
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