Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?
The youngsters are the backbone of every nation. They will build the
next
generation in the future. Nowadays young persons are well educated compare to before days
. A fair amount of people
think that current days
adolescents are hold
more Change the verb form
are held
awarness
and analysed many things compare to old generations Correct your spelling
awareness
such
as environment, poverty
, animal welfare and etc. However
, I strongly believe this
statement because these days
an adult haS more worry and scrutinize about many
Correct your spelling
any
problem
.
Change to a plural noun
problems
To begin
with, irrefutably in this
modern era people
are concerned about nature and they would like to know about surrounding problems. Is this
a positive development? the answer is yes. Matured
person is being more Add an article
A matured
The matured
concioused
to protect our environment problem in order to they are able to contribute the society how their Correct your spelling
conscious
activity based
Add a hyphen
activity-based
such
as reduce the pollution but it is not possible for previous
period. Add an article
the previous
Therefore
, today folks are done more plant
trees in their home as well as Replace the word
planting
society
. Change preposition
in society
For example
, the
Indian state of Tamilnadu an adult was done the world record of planting many plants in one place along with Change preposition
in the
one-day
.
Correct your spelling
one day
Furthermore
, poverty
is the most dengerous
things Correct your spelling
dangerous
such
as killing disease. Before days
folks were being affected poverty
but nowadays adolescent are very intelligent because they cleverly know about how to increase their Change preposition
by poverty
livinghood
in order to stop Correct your spelling
living hood
poverty
. In ,addition, current living man has more saving habits for their future and they are good at managing financial compare to past. Moreover
, the most imporatnt
one is animal welfare. Correct your spelling
important
this
issue also
the teens are handled top-notch outweigh the olden stage generation. These days
teenager creates more awarness
about animal welfare Correct your spelling
awareness
such
documantary
, films, project and etc. Correct your spelling
documentary
For example
, in
Change preposition
apply
nowdays
many Correct the word
nowadays
hollywood
movies are taken related to species of creatures Change the capitalization
Hollywood
such
as birds, animals, insects in ordetr
to they are being created the Correct your spelling
order
bondness
of animals and Correct your spelling
boldness
fondness
people
even wild animals also
.
To conclude, ancient generation people
had ability
to handle Change the article
the ability
this
problem but modern
guy has a lot of ability and Add an article
the modern
knowdledge
about their nature as well as their personal life too. Correct your spelling
knowledge
Hence
, undoubtedly our youngesters
are the best saviour and superman to stop Correct your spelling
youngsters
this kinds
of troubles compare to our Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
grand parents
period.Correct your spelling
grandparents
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