Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

tourism

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industry

has become one of the most thriving industries across the world.

Although

this

industry

has many economic benefits, its harmful impacts on

culture

and

environment

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have been neglected. From my point of view,

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of

this

industry

outweigh its disadvantages. International

tourism

creates great benefits in many aspects.

Initially

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it provides a great chance to individuals to visit different places and cultures. According to my observation, visiting another country is not only a harmless sector for

culture

but

also

a great way for people to share the different cultures with each other and enrich them. Despite

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the fact that some inconsiderate foreigners tend to ruin

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just for having fun, governments should enforce some tough rules to prevent these individuals from doing disruptive

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.

As a result

,

such

problems can be easily tackled with government’s precautions. The

second

reason why I advocate

this

point of view is that I do believe that

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tourism

is in a direct relationship with

environment

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and

culture

. If the

environment

or

culture

get ruined,

tourism

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industry

will no longer

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. A good illustration of

this

is Isfahan where is located in Iran has many historical buildings and mosques,

however

, because of lack of sufficient maintenance and rules

this

city cannot attract tourists

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.

As a result

,

tourism

and

environment

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the environment

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are related together. To sum up,

although

there are some criticisms for

tourism

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industry

, I do believe that

this

sector has much more benefits than harms for

culture

and

environment

. Actually,

this

sector contributes significantly to keeping

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and

culture

safe and rich.