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The children who grow up in a family short of money are more capable of dealing with problems in adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Family conditions play a crucial role
on
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children
’s
future
 and their ability
of facing
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problem
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a problem
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. It is sometimes argued that
ones
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those
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 who were born in rich
families
 are not
skillful
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 enough to handle
problems
 in life;
however
, others who had low- or
mid-- income
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mid-income
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families
 are able to overcome
problems
 in
best
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the best
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 way. As far as I am concerned, the
children
 who were born in poor
families
 are prepared better to solve the issues of life than others who born in rich
families
. A child who was born in
family
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 with a bad financial situation experienced more difficulties to be solved.
This
 is because in most unfortunate
families
 both parents usually work and do not have enough time to
fulfill
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 their offspring’s needs so
this
 force
children
 to be more independent and take care of themselves.
Further
 investigations have been
caried
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carried
 out on
children
 with various family conditions which prove that
although
children
 who were born in rich
families
 have more educational opportunities to learn better,
children
 with poor
families
 show better performance against
problems
 in their personal lives and get more successful in the
future
.
Children
 from richer
families
 are
little
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 behind in terms of learning many important skills in childhood in comparison with the mindset of poor
children
;
However
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however
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, they have all the facilities which they need for their education and
future
. A good illustration for that they are well equipped with all the necessary requirement to start a business or join a job without any trouble;
however
, they cannot handle
those business
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that business
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 because of
lack
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 of some skills that they had to learn from their childhood. To sum up,
children
 who had poor financial conditions for living had to learn more skills that help them in
future
 to tackle all the issues that they will encounter;
however
, ones who brought up in rich
families
 have less experience to solve their
problems
 in many aspects of life.
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