When there is a rise in the standard of living, people in the cities are more benefited than those in rural areas. Please give your opinion on the problems arising from this discrimination.

Globalization,
Industrailization
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Industrialization
have
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come with many advantages. New technology in the field of communication, automobiles, and electronic devices are increasing
living
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the living
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standard of
people
. Especially,
public
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the public
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who live in
a
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urban
areas
have
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more benefit than in rural
areas
. With
this
discrimination comes
with
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many
problem
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problems
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in
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society. In the following statement, I give my opinion on rising problems due to provided statement. Begin with, the Government main focus on the development of
cities
. In the
cities
, they have benefited like taxpayer are more in
cities
rather in urban
areas
.
There
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economy
depend
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on the big
cities
. Due to
this
reason
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they neglect the development of the urban
areas
. In the village,
community
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the community
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do not have
much
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resources
like
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in the urban area.
For example
, medical services, road, and many more
facilites
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facilities
are not available in the village. when these have an emergency case related health issue
then
they face a harsh reality and they have to
travell
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travel
a long distance to the hospital.
Furthermore
, in the village, the main occupation is farming and the generations are very
fasinated
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fascinated
toward western culture. They leave their home town to get a job and live a standard life like in the
cities
. Old
people
have to do farming on their own. Farming is not
a
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easy job. If
farmer
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does not do their farming
then
in the future
people
have to face
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crisis. To conclude, everyone wants a standard
living
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but the Government never neglect the rural
areas
to maintain the urban
areas
. All
people
have
rights
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to get
the
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basic need. It is
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government responsibility to provide these things to everyone.
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