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You have asked for a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you would like to discuss in the meeting.

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I am writing to notify you about our
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software
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 training for all digital artists. As you know, I am working in
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 production house
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 the past couple of
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, and I was aware of
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the latest
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software
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. I helped
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 to enhance the work quality of our 2d animation movies over the past couple of
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 so that we can gain more audience. I feel that our employees who were working
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 are not aware of
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industry related
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softwares
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software
. In my view, we should provide training related to the new updated
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. It will help our company to create highly realistic output which
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 to achieve professional growth.
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, animation has progressed a lot in terms of
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. I think we should provide training
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 which is
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 in the market. It will take one month to learn the complete
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. It would be appreciated if you can allow me time
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to train myself with the
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 so that I can help other employees to enhance the work in
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a production
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 house.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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