What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
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this
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would like to purchase for online shopping. Recend
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the
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people
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product
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To begin
with, irrefutably,there are many reasons in
online shopping for Change preposition
for
people
as well as companies. Firstly
, virtual shopping has tons of products in different kinds of brand
in one place so we can easily get any Add an article
the brand
a brand
product
without going to
outside. Remove the preposition
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Secondly
, in this
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people
do not have a
time to go to direct shop while they are prefered easy purchasing Change the article
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such
as online. Therefore
, folks can save a lot of time. Thirdly
, company
point of view, they are easily being sold different kinds of product
. Moreover
, online shopping is not a production company
it is a platform of sales variety company
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of company
product
in one place. Therefore
, this
types of firm do not need to invest huge amount of money because they are being connected to the Correct determiner usage
these
people
and manufactures
. Replace the word
manufacturers
Therefore
, they do not have any company
setup such
as building, labour, and etc. E-shopping is done click all the product
picture as well as details in their online platform not only the local product
but also
international product
too. For example
, one of the best and huge electronic shopping which is ebay
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eBay
This
enterprise is held more products to around the world even we can purchase any country product
without going to particular
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However
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be ignore
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as some e-shopping company
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Furthermore
, they are showed
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different
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the different
product
and sells another company
product
such
as low quality
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low-quality
product
. Company
side, each and every online buying firm they
must put a lot Correct pronoun usage
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a
effort to sell their Correct your spelling
of
product
becasue
they have to stimulate to Correct your spelling
because
people
buying goods even the people
do not need and they are given more money to
their Change preposition
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promotion
advertisement Replace the word
promotional
such
as internet
.
To conclude, there are many advantages as well as disadvantages Add an article
the internet
in
online shopping inevitably. Change preposition
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Nevertheless
, each a
local firm should Correct article usage
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taken
steps to motivate Change the verb form
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be taken
to
their country public Change preposition
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buy
local products Fix the infinitive
to buy
such
as incresing
the quality of goods and promoting their country Correct your spelling
increasing
product
such
as advertisement. In ,addition, local companies are given discount
in order to attract the population to buy goods and they must do match and satisfy Add an article
a discount
the discount
international
quality of Add an article
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the product
product
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