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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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 and core value are the basics of any culture or tradition for centuries. in a new world where capitalism is thriving
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, an approach seems useless. but the character of the person is important and even still considered crucial.
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, the people's thinking changed after some eye-opening events. let us thoroughly discuss both sides of the issue. judgement is inevitable because of the gap between rich and poor which is increasing day by day. under-privileged people are not equally treated ,once society recognised them as mediocre. my disagreement got even more eliviate ,because of the biased nature of teachers, coaches, doctors and even in government jobs. for ,example a black guy was denied the job of a security guard ,because of his colour. racial attacks and comments are common in developed countries even though they have strict policies regarding
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 provides some of the great opportunities to people ,which belong to a higher
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so that we can share them with our future generation. for ,instance an old man teaching grandson about, the great leader of India Mahatma Gandhi for his enormous contribution to the freedom struggle of India. I am in the conclusion that a fair balance should be maintained between moral values and social
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 so that discrimination can be eliminated from society. a famous person said, injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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