A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?

Next
to air,
water
is the most important element for
preservation
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of life. In the
last
decade, lack of
water
has become a serious
problem
which directly affects human being's life. In
this
essay, I will discuss the possible causes and remedies to overcome
this
issue.
Water
scarcity brought on by a combination of climate change and mismanagement. One of the main cause of the
problem
is flooding irrigation in traditional farming.
That is
to say, in some arid countries like Iran, agriculture accounts for around 90
percent
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of total
water
usage. Despite the fact that Iran is an arid country, most farmers still rely on traditional methods which
wastes
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around 60
percent
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of the
water
used and date back centuries, or plant trees that thrive with
water
. One way to alleviate
this
issue by
government
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the government
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would be to empower farmers to set up drip irrigation system which can save up to 80
percent
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more
water
than conventional irrigation and can even contribute to more crops yields.
Moreover
, it should be compulsory to use crop species that are native to arid regions and are naturally drought-tolerant. Another obvious reason
of
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this
issue is household
waste
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water
.
In other words
, the average person unknowingly wastes up to 30 gallons of
water
every day.
This
problem
could be addressed by launching
publicity
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campaign in the media and in schools to educate people about how to use less
water
in our daily life.
For example
,by turning off the faucet while doing oral care or watering the plants in the evening to minimize evaporation. To conclude, more than 180 million people are now affected by
water
poverty. The responsibility of tackling
this
problem
lies not only in the hands of citizens but
also
requires the Agriculture Ministry help. Action must be taken urgently,
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we will face catastrophic results in the future.
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